Friday, November 12, 2010

M4

Hot as usually I Akeria soul have the most difficult challenge yet the curse of the mummy. Legend says that a Crystal stone lays a head up in the pyramid of Khufu.many people have died in this journey.Bobbie traps and mummy's  who come to live.Now its my turn to do this journey.A boy named Ron little who is helping me on the journey is arahaloist I knew Ron since kindergarten.With the help of Ron I am so ready to do this.WISH ME LUCK.OMG! The crystal I said crying in tears. I walked in the hard rough ground trying to reach the crystal of Khufu. I stared at what was going to be my last chance




Oh No!! Little as we know it Ron stepped on a boobie trap. Run!! I said scared out of my mind. Knifes as sharp as a sharks teeth. Enormous ropes that will grab you alive and you could be strangled to death. Vines will grap you Ahhh! No coming back. Ron!!! I said wondering how are we going to pass through. I reached my hand to get the crystal. Just so suddenly, the crystal started to glow. I got it! Ok let's go! Ron said being scared at the boobie traps. The legend also says that to get through the traps you  must have a key. "What key" me and Ron both asked ourselves. Did you know Khufu was a pharaoh? The Key of Wisdom. go down a tunnel behind the crystal of Khufu. Find a black key the size of a tooth pick. We went inside the tunnel it's pitch black dark, webs and bats up in the ceiling. ron brought a flashlight just in case. I found it!!! It was full of webs and inside Khufu's body.



Did you know Khufu build the great pryramid of Egypt. Let's get out of here it's starting to creep me out. I said, climbing up the rope.  "ha" ron said in a weird voice. "What" I said, so confused. There is a little thing to put the key in. "put it in" I said, then all the traps went away.

Me and Ron ran as fast as we could and drove away. We went to the museum to go and put the crystal in a nice safe place. Overnight as I was sleeping the cyrstal was stolen. Oh no! Ron said. But Ron I tryied to tell you it was a fake crystal. We have the real one ."ok" Go back to sleep. We have a long day ahead of us.

5 comments:

  1. I really like your story. I also hope you survive. Good luck! And nice job on the story it was very well written, I like the part when you said "Legend says that crystal stone lays a head up in the pyramid of Khufu." It sounded really cool. Nice job!

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  2. I love how you added a new person in your story! Good luck on your adventurer!

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  3. I love how you got right to the point of the story. Very creative!
    Your friend, Farly Mamba

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  4. Good Luck! I wish you would write about your adventure.

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