Monday, May 16, 2011

M14: The myth of the Great Bath

"It's  been a long time coming" my parents say. As a kid I watched scooby doo.They solve mystery's that can never be answered by other people. And now I'm doing the same . The disappearance of Mohenjodaro is the biggest mystery of all in Indus-Sarasvati.  Anyway I am looking forward to go see the Great bath. The great bath is a Asiatic made with waterproof bricks. It was 37 ft long and 8 ft deep. Some archaeologist's think the great bath was also used for  religious ritual instead of bathing. Meanwhile I start to find clues for the disappearance. Also I talked to people to see what they think happened in the year 1900 b.c.e.
 

"I think someone poisoned everybody in the city", said a old man
 
"I think it was magic just like in Harry Potter", said a crazy man

 I couldn't find enough clues to prove the disappearance, but there was one person I didn't talk to and his name was Rio Williams. He is a good friend. He told me he did some research on the disappearance and it said The myth of the Great bath. This was told by a man named Ron Williams. He and his friends were going swimming one day. Then soon as they knew it they were drowning because they forgot how to swim. Then a few years later the Great bath clasped, well Rio was telling the story, I ate a sandwich with  extra mustard. Why didn't he tell me , said Rio with a confuse voice. I'm not sure,but i have to go. I have a long day a had tomorrow.                                                                                                                  

4 comments:

  1. Cool! I like the twist in the story!

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  2. mmhh really really nice

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  3. COOL I really like the story! pretty funny to!

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  4. I think I agree with the crazy man. Don't believe Rio Williams.

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