Wednesday, November 10, 2010

M3:the pharaoh

In Egypt its like 100 degrees outside. I'm not use to this kind of weather . Oh by the way I meet a pharaoh named RAMSES11.In 24 a.d I am walking in the hard Rockie  ground by my self exploring the world of pharaoh s and their temples. One of the pharaohs is named Ramses11. Ramses was the pharaoh of Egypt in 1290 to 1224 b.c.e . One of Ramses most impressive projects was the temple complex at Abu Simbel.The main temple was carved into the side of a cliff on a bank of the Nile river.And a smaller temple honored his favorite wife Nefertari.Ting Ting . "hello. hello Akeria Soul,Sr.Zeeor here.Hi. Akeria you are going to meet Ramses11 this afternoon at 3:00pm.Ok.Ill see your there. Bye.Bye''.Yessss!Iam so excited to be meeting him.I am Ramses11 the pharaoh of Egpyt ,he said staring at me with his red firer eyes.Lets begin.IN SIDE THE TEMPLE OF NEFERTARI.TO BE CONTINUED ...........

4 comments:

  1. I really Liked your story, it left me hanging off my chair..... literally.... It was a great story, I liked the part when you were explaining about Ramses, It was a very interesting story! Good job!

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  2. Saying that it was 100 degrees and he ground was hard and rocky painted a picture in my head.

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  3. The pharaoh's red eyes were really creepy!

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  4. I like how you included when Ramses reigned.

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